Watercolors are fun, but definitely tricky. I think you did great, though. =) Especially since it looks like you didn't ink this, which makes it even more difficult. At least for me... Anyway, nice job! I'm not officially trained or anything, so take this with caution (ha), but if you want bolder colors, have you tried letting it dry completely and then working the pic again with colors that are not as diluted? That's how I got my brights brighter. Also, you might consider mixed media.

I actually really like how soft this is. I think it is just bold enough... But not too bold. So please, don't knock yourself too hard. ^^

Wow... Your watercolor skills are intense! I absolutely /adore/ the coloring!

I love the soft style and the wonderful purple tint.

Niiiiiiice